This would fit in very nicely in a RPG, Sim or Visual Novel of some sort, for a more peaceful scene, but not quite yet, in my opinion.
The thing is, I believe this has the potential to be a great song, but it really needs a melody, a lead. My personal suggestion would be to keep the beat going after it's in, and work a melody on top of the base, maybe try to vary a little bit.
It's already pretty catchy though, hahah‼
I really like the melody, it's good to listen to it, and it makes you feel relaxed, happy. :)
I'm not that much into techno, dance, house or that kind of stuff. But I really enjoy the way you mixed the piano at the beginning, and the orchestral at 2:00. Also, the tone change at 3:16 is masterful, and fits right in!!
I really like it!!
The guitar timbre, for the clean part, really isn't the best, but it still manages to sound good.
The part that I think you should give a little more attention next time, is the velocity on the drums, so that it varies, sounds natural, and also a little less volume on it. But I like them too, especially in the heavy parts.
All in all, you're getting better for Metal everyday!!
So that's why it sounded so familiar!!
This explains it all. xD
That was really great!! From the middle on, it reminded me a lot of ZeRo_BaSs' works (and I really like them).
It's been a while since I haven't come to NewGrounds, but surely was worth coming back, just for this. I'm putting this on my phone for sure!!
Great job, loved it.
thanks so much! glad you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed remixing it! :)
MIDI's what ruins it...
(Long time no see!! x3)
I'm reviewing the composition, the melody here. Because the fact of it being MIDI, takes out of the sound quality. I think you should start looking for some VSTs or Soundfonts.
I liked the melody!! The Piano did a great job for being the percussion, but it still needs some percussion instruments. The BASE could vary more, but the song is pretty short, so I don't think this is really necessary.
Overall, I liked it. :3
I liked the song, really. x3
It's pretty happy, upbeat.
No one noticed the big Yiruma moment there? xD
River Flows in You FTW!!
Nice one :3
Can't let you do that star fox!
Thanks for the review :D
Very nice. :3
This sounds great. Would sound much better in some animation or game, something like... a shooter?
It's really nice and all, gives me a sensation of danger, something decisive.
One thing, though. It's a tad repetitive... I think you could vary it much more.
Overall, it's great, but I feel you can still do much better. :3
Here goes some tips
Hey there buddy!
Well, here goes some little tips:
I think Guitar Pro would be the best software to work with MIDIs. It's pretty simple to learn and easy to use.
Another thing, try to vary on the riffs, and use percursion...
BTW, do you have messenger? Maybe we could work on this together, it's got a real nice melody...
Pretty complex progression on the Piano, and I loved it.
Really, I don't know what else to say. In fact I don't need to say anything else.
Wow, thank you very much for the nice review! :)
I'm so glad you liked it.
I gotta say: Simply Great!
It's a clean track, but it can still give the mood!
Could have a bigger impact with a low base, but that depends on your intentions for the song.
I loved it! Favorited! :D
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